Review: Pilu of the Woods by Mai K. Nguyen

Middle school can be tough and with big changes in her life, Willow clings to the familiar: her love of learning and what her mother taught her about nature, including everything she knows about her mother’s favorite magnolia blossoms that grow in their backyard.

But there’s still a lot to deal with and one day she runs away into the woods where she meets Pilu, a nature spirit who lives in the very magnolia grove that Willow’s visited countless times. Will helping Pilu find her way home and reconcile with her mother help Willow deal with the hurt inside herself? Find out in Pilu of the Woods.

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Published: 16 April 2019

Publisher: Oni Press

Category: Sequential Art/Fantasy/Middle Grade

A heartwarming story of friendship, loss, and finding your way home from debut author/illustrator Mai K. Nguyen!

Willow loves the woods near her house. They’re calm and quiet, so different from her own turbulent emotions, which she keeps locked away. When her emotions get the better of her one day, she decides to run away into the woods.

There, she meets Pilu, a lost tree spirit who can’t find her way back home—which turns out to be the magnolia grove Willow’s mom used to take her to. Willow offers to help Pilu, and the two quickly become friends.

But the journey is long, and Pilu isn’t sure she’s ready to return home yet—which infuriates Willow, who’s determined to make up for her own mistakes by getting Pilu back safely. As a storm rages and Willow’s emotions bubble to the surface, they suddenly take on a physical form, putting both girls in danger… and forcing Willow to confront her inner feelings once and for all.

Rating: 4 Stars

CW: bullying, death of a parent

The art, first and foremost, sets a wonderful tone for the book. It’s beautiful rendered from the humans/humanoids creatures in the book to the various nature scenes. Combining that with seamless scientific facts regarding the plants that Willow encounters along her journey with Pilu, such as how mushrooms grow and how a fairy ring is formed, was really interesting.

The tension was very real between Willow and her older sister, Linnea. Their relationship reminded me a bit of Lilo and Nani what with the sibling dynamic, though their father was around and spoken of often by Willow, such as how he taught her about nature. Linnea’s caretaker role, though, and her scenes with Willow highlight the early stress that the family is feeling before the first page due to her behavior, how she was trying to keep the stress of Willow’s school problems their father, and she reacted to yet another phone call from Willow’s teacher regarding her punching a bully.

This segue into Willow’s running into the forest, meeting Pilu, and starting her journey to bring Pilu home, to learning more about herself, was heartbreaking even as it was a necessary catalyst for the rest of the story.

I like the conversation the book brings up about “little monsters” (bad thoughts/feelings). Willow and Pilu have an important conversation about how they (the monsters) can be so loud, “louder than your heart”, and can be set off by anything and only brought back by saying terrible things. That feeling might be familiar to many readers because who hasn’t said something in anger?

Talking about emotions, being open about the things that made one upset, whether it is loneliness or a significant loss, and giving a sort of embodiment to them, became a starting point of realization for how to deal with feelings for Willow and Pilu. This situation, the monsters and the keeping them bottled up, was an analogy that is a good one to translate to the real world and talk to young readers in a way that makes sense to them, especially if they don’t understand outbursts or why they feel angry.

There’s an enjoyable re-readability quality to Pilu and I look forward to reading it again in the future when the finished copies are published. The artwork, the prose, all of it deserves a place on shelves and in hearts.

 

 

 

 

 

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A Chapter by Chapter Release Week Blitz: Eyes on Me by Rachel Harris

All this week Chapter by Chapter is celebrating Rachel Harris and the release of her new book, Eyes on Me, a novel about stress, dancing, secrets, and falling in love. There’s a lot to take in and enjoy in this book.

Out 26 March, you can pick up a copy from any of the linked retailers below. Also, be sure to check out the giveaway in this post for your chance to win a copy of Rachel’s new book. 🙂

 

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Published: 26 March 2019

Publisher: Entangled Teen

Category: Romance/Young Adult

Look up the word “nerd” and you’ll find Lily Bailey’s picture. She’s got one goal: first stop valedictorian, next stop Harvard. Until a stint in the hospital from too much stress lands her in the last place a klutz like her ever expected to be: salsa dance lessons.

Look up the word “popular” and you’ll find Stone Torres’s picture. His life seems perfect—star of the football team, small-town hero, lots of friends. But his family is struggling to make ends meet, so if pitching in at his mom’s dance studio helps, he’ll do it.

When Lily’s dad offers Stone extra cash to volunteer as Lily’s permanent dance partner, he can’t refuse. But with each dip and turn, each moment her hand is in his, his side job starts to feel all too real. Lily shows Stone he’s more than his impressive football stats, and he introduces her to a world outside of studying. But with the lines blurred, can their relationship survive the secret he’s been hiding?

 

 

About the Author

 

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New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Rachel Harris writes humorous love stories about sassy girls-next-door and the hot guys that make them swoon. Vibrant settings, witty banter, and strong relationships are a staple in each of her books…and kissing. Lots of kissing. An admitted bookaholic and homeschool mom, she gets through each day by laughing at herself, hugging her kids, and watching way too much Food Network with her husband. She writes young adult, new adult, and adult romances, and LOVES talking with readers!

 

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Giveaway Details

 

One (1) winner will receive a physical copy of Eyes on Me by Rachel Harris (US Only)

 

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Review: Rayne & Delilah’s Midnite Matinee by Jeff Zentner

For fans of late night horror films, the cheesier the better, Rayne & Delilah’s Midnite Matinee reaches out to embrace you. Two best friends who highlight a different oldie-but-“goodie” horror film each Saturday night on public access television, Josie (Rayne) and Delia (Delilah) bond over these films and the friendship that blossomed because of them. However, now with graduation approaching, family problems growing larger by the minute, and personal relationships becoming something of a quagmire, will their Televison Six show be enough to hold them together or is the future too tenuous?

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Published: 26 February 2019

Publisher: Crown Books for Young Readers

Category: Young Adult/Contemporary

From the Morris Award-winning author of The Serpent King comes a contemporary novel about two best friends who must make tough decisions about their futures–and the TV show they host–in their senior year of high school.

Every Friday night, best friends Delia and Josie become Rayne Ravenscroft and Delilah Darkwood, hosts of the campy creature feature show Midnite Matinee on the local cable station TV Six.

But with the end of senior year quickly approaching, the girls face tough decisions about their futures. Josie has been dreading graduation, as she tries to decide whether to leave for a big university and chase her dream career in mainstream TV. And Lawson, one of the show’s guest performers, a talented MMA fighter with weaknesses for pancakes, fantasy novels, and Josie, is making her tough decision even harder.

Scary movies are the last connection Delia has to her dad, who abandoned the family years ago. If Midnite Matinee becomes a hit, maybe he’ll see it and want to be a part of her life again. And maybe Josie will stay with the show instead of leaving her behind, too.

As the tug-of-war between growing up and growing apart tests the bonds of their friendship, Josie and Delia start to realize that an uncertain future can be both monstrous…and momentous.

Rating: 3 Stars

Rep: depression

I wasn’t really aware that horror hosting was a thing before Rayne & Delilah. Sure I’d heard of Elvira, but beyond that not so much. So the concept was super interesting, adding to the fact that I love horror movies and I don’t get to indulge in them as much as I’d like because I don’t have anyone in my immediate real life to share them with.

I wasn’t thrilled with the execution of the story, though.

It may have had something to do with so much of the opening having to do with Josie & Delia filming an episode of their show Midnite Matinee, but even once the action moved  past the filming it still felt kinda flat. The voices of the main characters were very similar, like if they were changed Delia and Josie’s voices would be indistinct. There was even a point where, in a Josie chapter, this was highlighted by a p.o.v. signifier being wrong with no notice being given. I don’t think it happened more than once in the rest of the book, but it strengthened my problem with Josie & Delia’s voices being too alike.

Once they were apart and talking to others, it was easier to see Delia and Josie opening up into their own persons. As a reader it became a better experience and there was more opportunity to enjoy their interactions, conversations, and internal thoughts.

Some of the other issues that I had, even with these improvements, included the distinct lack of communication between Josie and Delia. Their friendship felt a bit unbalanced because of this, especially when thinking about Josie’s dream of being on television (as unrelated to horror hosting) or Delia’s attachment to Midnite Matinee and staying in their town.

Delia was complicated, messy, interesting. She had a lot going on, such as searching for the father that abandoned her and her mother ten years prior to the start of the book; her mental health (depression) as well as that of her mother (also depression); the stability and possibility of Midnite Matinee, the only sort-of link she has to her father. There were difficult times, what Delia referred to as dark days, whether for her or her mother. On some level I was able to see why why Delia didn’t want Josie to go to Knoxville for college, for the internship. Her sick mother & abandonment issues, her best friend & the Midnite Matinee are vital parts of her identity. Without them, who is Delia? That’s the question she struggles with throughout Rayne & Delilah, even as she’s asking questions like what’s wrong with her or why don’t people stay with her if nothing is actually wrong?

Josie was something else. After much of the book, I found myself really wondering: who was she? Reading the book, we know she wants to be on t.v., wants her own show, but other than that and Midnite Matinee, who is she? What does she like? There are some Netflix titles dropped that she watches away from Delia, but her individuality seems almost non-existent until Lawson showed up.

Lawson, who is ostensibly a side character, had more dimensions than she did. He was a MMA fighter, he enjoys reading fantasy novels, he even gets into a bit of horror hosting because of Josie. It felt like there was more thought put into his dream track of being a professional MMA fighter than Josie’s television industry person. As much as I liked Lawson, this feels like a failing of Josie, one of the main (titular!) characters. It would have been nice to get a better idea of her personality, heck, even more depth of her t.v. aspirations.

This wasn’t a terribly written book, but there was an overwhelmingly feeling of “meh” when I was finished and looking for a word to describe how I felt about Midnite Matinee. It could be enjoyable, but I think it’s just under the border of character driven enjoyable and not really near any kind of mark as far as plot driven. Some humor in the form of extreme cringe alleviates the third act, but it’s not enough to raise my estimation of the overall work.

 

Favorite Quotes

 

Here’s the thing with dreams…

…they’re carefully tailored to the only audience who will ever see them, which is you. So I’m not big on telling people about my dreams for that reason.

 

I love mediocre people. The ones who try their hardest to make something beautiful, something great, something that people will remember and talk about when they’re gone—and they come up short.

 

We laugh at them, but you really have no choice in this life but to believe with all your heart that you’re extraordinary. You have to hold this conviction against all evidence to the contrary. Living is too sad otherwise.

 

Most of all, I think it’s people who love to be reminded that sometimes you do your best and you come up short, but there’s still a place in the world for people like that.

 

There’s nothing in this world worse than a phone notification that’s not for the thing you need.

 

 

 

 

 

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Review: The Bookshop of Yesterdays by Amy Meyerson

Books about libraries or bookstores are usually a go-to for me, something I usually love because their subject matter is something so dear to my heart. The Bookshop of Yesterdays sounded like it would surely be among that sort, after the main character, Miranda, inherits a bookstore from her uncle. Sad circumstances, surely, but inheriting a bookstore could provide an interesting backdrop for a literary journey.

While reading the actual book, however, I found that the actual experience wasn’t really all that pleasant.

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Published: 12 June 2018

Publisher: Park Row

Category: Fiction/Contemporary

A woman inherits a beloved bookstore and sets forth on a journey of self-discovery in this poignant debut about family, forgiveness and a love of reading.

Miranda Brooks grew up in the stacks of her eccentric Uncle Billy’s bookstore, solving the inventive scavenger hunts he created just for her. But on Miranda’s twelfth birthday, Billy has a mysterious falling-out with her mother and suddenly disappears from Miranda’s life. She doesn’t hear from him again until sixteen years later when she receives unexpected news: Billy has died and left her Prospero Books, which is teetering on bankruptcy–and one final scavenger hunt.

When Miranda returns home to Los Angeles and to Prospero Books–now as its owner–she finds clues that Billy has hidden for her inside novels on the store’s shelves, in locked drawers of his apartment upstairs, in the name of the store itself. Miranda becomes determined to save Prospero Books and to solve Billy’s last scavenger hunt. She soon finds herself drawn into a journey where she meets people from Billy’s past, people whose stories reveal a history that Miranda’s mother has kept hidden–and the terrible secret that tore her family apart.

Bighearted and trenchantly observant, The Bookshop of Yesterdays is a lyrical story of family, love and the healing power of community. It’s a love letter to reading and bookstores, and a testament to how our histories shape who we become.

Rating: 3 Stars

It was difficult to like the main character, Miranda. She continually had this air of selfishness. She was always barging ahead, wanting to know her family’s secrets, regardless of how much it was hurting her mother (Susan) and how much these were her mother’s own secrets (and, thus, her right to tell or not). There were also moments like this where Miranda seemed utterly baffled when someone (her mother or her boyfriend, Jay) didn’t react in a way that would make her feel better. She expected the world to revolve around her and as a nearly 30 year old person, this made her an infuriating character to have to view the story through. What redemption was there for her?

What could, in theory, be called the romance aspects of the book were not enjoyable in the least. Miranda is, technically, involved with a man named Jay from the beginning of the novel. There was so little chemistry between Miranda & Jay throughout the book as to make their “relationship” irrelevant. Then, however, there was a drunken, cruel phone call introduced that one can only assume is meant to make the reader sympathetic to Miranda’s situation when, really, it highlights how poor the two of them have been treating each other.

It seemed such a poor choice, especially when coupled with Miranda’s interaction with the manager of Prospero Books, another “love interest” (if he could be called that). Basically, no one made good choices here and it was so frustrating because it didn’t feel like the author was intending for these characters to be so unlikeable, but that’s what they were. I felt no sympathy for anyone’s romantic situation, more bafflement than anything.

Something that was interesting was the way that the author played with memory. I wasn’t sure at first if it was intentional. I thought perhaps it was a continuity error, but by the end I think there are a few examples of the author playing with not only a somewhat unreliable narrator, but other characters who misremember “facts” that they relate to Miranda.

One of the biggest problems I had, however, affected the tone of the book from fairly early on. At around the 17% point, the author tipped her hand and revealed what I would say is basically the answer to the “secret” of the entire book. There was a conversation between Miranda and her mother regarding Billy, the former owner of Prospero Books, that was quite significant and, like I said, it affected the tone of the rest of the book. There was then almost no tension regarding Miranda’s search, this quest that seemed to supposedly be her main point. It was such a disappointment.

I’m a bit conflicted about The Bookshop of Yesterdays overall. The people in it that were the focus of the book were not particularly nice people to read about, especially since readers are seeing the events of the book through their eyes. The writing was not truly awful, so it’s not a thoroughly unenjoyable read. I just find it hard to find anyone in this book to root for that’s actually present in the book and isn’t talked about off page.

 

 

 

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A Rockstar Book Tour: The Shadow’s Watch Series by S.A. Klopfenstein, with a Fancast by the Author

Today’s feature is about The Shadow’s Watch series by S.A. Klopfenstein. Rockstar Book Tours brings a tour of interviews, spotlights, and more together to celebrate the newest book in the series, The Rage of Saints. I want to thank Rockstar for having me on the tour and S.A. Klopfenstein for their guest post, a fancast of characters from the series.

Be sure to check out all the stops on the Tour Schedule below as well as the giveaway, in which one winner (US only) will win finished copies of the first two books in the Shadow’s Watch series.

 

The Shadow’s Watch (Book One)

 

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Published: 15 May 2018

Publisher: Guardian Grey Publishing

Category: Fantasy

For centuries, the Oshan Empire has ruled the New World with terror and blood. The Watchers have been eradicated, and their sorcery is but a whispered myth. But the heart of magic beats on, and as it surges back to life, three young people will determine the fate of the world…

Tori Burodai, a strong-willed slave girl. Her magic could ignite a revolution, but only if she resists the ruler who wants to use her powers to restore the empire to its former glory.

Darien Redvar, the idealistic soldier she loves. His rage leads him down a dark path to power that could turn him against the one person he cares for.

Kale Andovier, a lordling rebel with a torturous past. His quest for a weapon of dark sorcery will thrust him into a twisted game of power that could change the world forever.

Will the return of magic transform the New World, or bring it to ruin?

 

The Rage of Saints (The Shadow’s Watch Book Two)

 

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Published: 26 March 2019

Publisher: Guardian Grey Publishing

Category: Fantasy

The thrilling second installment in the Shadow Watch series!

The Shadow Watch has been undone. Their captain lies in the dungeons of the White Citadel, and the Gallows Girl has disappeared. Most of the surviving Watchers have joined the chancellor’s new magical army, the Sky Guard, led by Darien Redvar, but the Gallows Boy is shaken from the return of the monsters of the Old World, and he must soon choose, once and for all, where his loyalties lie.

Tori and Mischa trek to the Great White North with an Alyut shaman, who believes Tori is the one who will bring Restoration to his people. A resistance is growing in the North, but Tori may not be the god the people are looking for, and the price of revolution may cost Tori her heart as well as her life.

Meanwhile, another threat grows in strength. Old World monsters are rising up across the New World, and no one knows how they’ve returned. As nations ready themselves for a magical war, their return threatens to change everything.

New alliances are set in place, new friendships are forged, new loves kindled. But no one is safe, for there can be no war without betrayal.

Don’t miss this the latest installment in the epic fantasy series readers are comparing to Mistborn and Throne of Glass!

 

Guest Post by S.A. Klopfenstein

 

What’s one thing readers do as we read? Picture the characters in our heads and fancast them! For this post, I asked S.A. Klopfenstein who they’d fancast as characters from the Shadow’s Watch series. Take a peek below for some insight into the choices and see if they match up with what you think as you read along with The Shadow’s Watch and The Rage of Saints.

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Tori Burodai (Rosa Salazar)

 

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Darien Redvar (Bob Morley)

 

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Cyrus Maro (Iwan Rheon)

 

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Kale Andovier (Tom Felton)

 

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Ren Andovier (Richard Madden)

 

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Mischa Sufai (Lana Condor)

 

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Vashti Burodai (Ivana Baquero)

 

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Kirra Fehn (Malese Jow)

 

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Valeria Sardona (Hera Hilmar)

 

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Ashi Burodai (Amber Rose Revah)

 

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Salla Burodai (Pedro Pascal)

 

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Seren le Tal (Clemence Poesy)

 

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Tes Falzen (Dafne Keen)

 

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Skya dul Baruk (Louisa d’Oliveira)

 

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Alyk dul Baruk (Ben Barnes)

 

About the Author

 

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S.A. Klopfenstein grew up on a steady dose of Tolkien and Star Wars. As a child, he wrote his first story about a sleepwalking killer who was executed by lethal injection.
He lives in the American West with his wife and their dog, Iorek Byrnison. He can be found exploring the peaks of the Rocky Mountains, or daring the halls of the middle school where he teaches Language Arts.

 

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1 lucky winner will win a finished copy of THE SHADOW WATCH & THE RAGE OF SAINTS, US Only.

 

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Tour Schedule

 

Week One

 

3.18.19

Lone Tree Reviews – Excerpt

Literary Gold – Spotlight

 

3.19.19

Kelly P’s Blog – Excerpt

TMBA Corbett Tries to Write – Interview

 

3.20.19

Life With No Plot – Review

The Hermit Librarian – Guest Post

 

3.21.19

Adventures Thru Wonderland – Review

Graced with Books – Interview

 

3.22.19

Lauren is Reading – Review

❧Defining Ways❧ – Guest Post

 

Week Two

 

3.25.19

Sincerely Karen Jo – Excerpt

BookHounds YA – Guest Post

 

3.26.19

Colorimetry – Guest Post

Two Chicks on Books – Interview

 

3.27.19

Owl Always Be Reading – Excerpt

Jaime’s World – Excerpt

 

3.28.19

D. Books and Reviews – Review

4covert2overt ☼ A Place In The Spotlight ☼ – Excerpt

 

3.29.19

Abooktropolis – Review

Lisa Loves Literature – Excerpt

 

 

 

 

 

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Review: The Summer of Jordi Perez (and the Best Burger in Los Angeles) by Amy Spalding *Spoilers*

Who wouldn’t want to put on a cute dress and eat some delicious burgers in the warm sunshine? Abby’s certainly got a lot to look forward to this summer, between cute looks, eating burgers around Los Angeles with her new friend Jax, plus an internship at hip boutique Lemonberry. With the possibility of a job at the end of the summer, the last thing Abby expects is to fall in love with Jordi, the other intern, but love isn’t a blog post you can schedule.

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Published: 7 April 2018

Publisher: Forever Young Audiobooks

Category: Young Adult/LGBT+/Contemporary Romance

Seventeen, fashion-obsessed, and gay, Abby Ives has always been content playing the sidekick in other people’s lives. While her friends and sister have plunged headfirst into the world of dating and romances, Abby has stayed focused on her plus-size style blog and her dreams of taking the fashion industry by storm. When she lands a prized internship at her favorite local boutique, she’s thrilled to take her first step into her dream career. She doesn’t expect to fall for her fellow intern, Jordi Perez. Abby knows it’s a big no-no to fall for a colleague. She also knows that Jordi documents her whole life in photographs, while Abby would prefer to stay behind the scenes.

Then again, nothing is going as expected this summer. She’s competing against the girl she’s kissing to win a paid job at the boutique. She’s somehow managed to befriend Jax, a lacrosse-playing bro type who needs help in a project that involves eating burgers across L.A.’s eastside. Suddenly, she doesn’t feel like a sidekick. Is it possible Abby’s finally in her own story?

But when Jordi’s photography puts Abby in the spotlight, it feels like a betrayal, rather than a starring role. Can Abby find a way to reconcile her positive yet private sense of self with the image that other people have of her?

Is this just Abby’s summer of fashion? Or will it truly be The Summer of Jordi Perez (and the Best Burger in Los Angeles)?

Rating: 3 Stars

Rep: F/F romance

Abby is a conflicting person. On the one hand, she has a blog that’s meant to be powerful and pro plus size, not to mention some internal monologue about how the world sees her and some discourse with others (“fat’s not a bad word”). Then, on the other hand, she makes a lot of self deprecating comments that clash. She also doesn’t like her photograph being taken, though especially not it being posted anywhere. This becomes a point of contention between her and others throughout the novel and a big one later one.

After reading this book, I would believe that Abby was fashion obsessed, but that she was focused on her blog? I’m not too sure about that. I think that that might have been the intention originally, to make it something that she wanted to pursue professionally and I think she could have, but in the text I didn’t see her mention it all that much. It felt like a very casual thing even while fashion itself remained important.

Jordi’s artwork and her enthusiasm, her passion for it, felt real. It would’ve been great to see the photographs that were described because they sounded amazing. Her family was also fun to read about, from her father who sent leftovers like pollo verde and and caldo de pollo to share with Abby or her brother Christian playing video games.

Beyond characters and into narrative, there were times when scenes felt rushed, like conversations and interactions that felt like they were speeding by as though the author didn’t quite know what to do with those people or that instance so needed to get through them asap. It happened at least once with Jax and Abby when they were out on one of their burger excursions (the timing was off in how things played out), which was odd because their relationship had been so well developed until then, almost more so than her relationship with Jordi, so why skimp then?

There’s a betrayal at the climax of the book on Jordi’s part that, while others in the book found to be not a big deal, for Abby’s part I found to be heartbreaking. It goes back to her self image and while that might have needed some improvement, it doesn’t excuse the act. I thought, from other reviews, that Abby’s reaction would be something overreaching but nope. It was actually about right. If I’d been betrayed like this, I’d be at least as pissed as Abby. I hate having pics taken of me and to trust someone to take them & then put them on public display? That’s HORRENDOUS.

There’s also an issue about the levels of story in this book: Abby, Jordi, and the internship at Lemonberry (Story A), Abby, Jax, and the burgers (Story B), and Abby and her mom, Norah (Story C). The first two were decently developed, with fluctuating levels of interest throughout. The conflict between Abby and her mother, however, felt like it was being shoehorned in, especially at the last minute. It could have been an important one, especially with the commentary on body image, Abby’s body positivity & her blog, and Norah’s health food movement, but it was buried below Story A (Abby, Jordi, & Lemonberry) and Story B (Abby, Jax, & burgers).

I also had an issue with the wrap up of the endings. With regards to Jordi’s photographs at the gallery & Abby’s reaction…Jordi takes them down, puts them back up, between the two of them they invite everyone back and Abby gets over all her insecurity in a snap? Just like that? It really didn’t make sense that something that was so deeply ingrained was so quickly, basically swept away.

Then the internship that they were competing for the whole summer, which was supposed to be a whole source of tension through the book? It was literally solved with a simple “Maggie asks Jordi and me if we just want to split the part-time hours in the fall. We’ll both barely make any money but we all feel silly that we didn’t think of this solution sooner.” That was SUCH a take-away-the-stakes thing to do. If this had been a physical ARC, I think I would have flung it away from me in frustration.

The Summer of Jordi Perez had its cute moments for sure and reading it had good moments. I don’t know that I’d read it again, but there’s some fun to be had in that initial read, so anyone looking for a reasonably quick, cute f/f with some delicious food asides and some definitely adorable fashion looks can turn to this book.

 

 

 

 

 

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Review: The Queen of Cups by Ren Basel

Theo’s family has long set sail on the ocean, all with the blessing of the Oracle. What will they find when they make their own trip to visit the woman in the dunes?

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Published: 1 March 2019

Publisher: Self-published

Category: LGBT+ Fantasy

A mysterious woman known only as The Oracle resides on the seashore, blessing ships and telling fortunes for those who can pay her price. For new-made ship captain Theo Marinos, the price is higher than it first seems.

If Theo has any hope of surviving their ship’s first voyage, they must trust not just in The Oracle, but in themself–for the journey is long, and the ocean’s tests are many.

Rating: 4 Stars

Rep: Gay, lesbian, trans, nonbinary, autistic, and asexual; MC with synthesia

One of the first things I noticed and loved about Ren’s story was the attention to detail they paid to setting.

The shack was small but not uninviting. Garlands of shells dangling from braided grasses adorned the whitewashed walls. There were shelves lined with gnarled bits of driftwood, wave-polished stones, tiny bits of colorful glass scoured by the sea, and other little treasures turned up by the tides. A scrubbed wooden table and matching chairs rested in front of a modest hearth, and there was a small bed tucked away in a corner.

From the Oracle’s shack to the world around Theo, there were beautiful descriptions that brought to mind these images with ease as the characters moved through Basel’s world. It was almost like the world popped up around me and renewed my love of the sea.

Aside from setting were the characters. I was sad that this was a short story because I could easily have read a full length story about Theo, their crew, and/or their family. Theo, an autistic asexual non-binary ship captain with synthesia, was interesting in and of themselves as they prepared to take to the sea with their own ship. With a family, two fathers and multiple siblings, who all have histories on the ocean, there’s a lot of possibility for tales beyond The Queen of Cups.

Without going into many details and thus potential spoiler territory, I’ll say that Theo learns a lot in their interactions with the Oracle, such as how there are many aspects to a story. The Oracle may have heard many tales and many adventures from across the seas, told to her by those that seek their fortunes, but the color of an individual’s perspective can mean so much more.

Ren Basel’s writing was engaging and made me look forward to more from their repertoire.

 

 

 

I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. Quotes included are from an advanced reader copy and may not reflect the finalized copy.

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